Haunting. And absolutely mesmerizing. Although I hope this is updated at some point, I know what has been posted already will stay in my head for a long time to come.
This is so masterfully done. I didn't notice that it's a demo and now i need more hahaha. This is amazing and even the small tidbit that we got is better narratively than most things there are to play or read
oh wow.. this is haunting and so. the writing is so simple but punching. im so impressed with this. i feel the grief and anguish the mc does. this is so well written
would love to read this but am currently stuck on this page with no way forward. There isn't anything to click on tht moves the story forward unfortunately.
thanks for letting me know! just had a look - might have to do with it being the first longer passage but couldn't find anything else that might be off. does anything seem to be up with the scrollbar?
I will attach another screenshot. Sorry I don't mean to be a bother lol I was just really excited to read the story. I enjoyed the little I read lol it just doesn't allow me to move from that spot. I expected another faded bit of text to click on. I tried reloading and even restarting. Maybe I'm missing something or i will try reading it using a different browser.
you're not being a bother at all! there def should be another faded bit of text - i'll check some different browsers & see if I can find anything! thanks again
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Haunting. And absolutely mesmerizing. Although I hope this is updated at some point, I know what has been posted already will stay in my head for a long time to come.
Wow! The narrative of this is beautiful! The writing style is great, love the whole thing so far!
Loved the demo!
This is so masterfully done. I didn't notice that it's a demo and now i need more hahaha. This is amazing and even the small tidbit that we got is better narratively than most things there are to play or read
oh wow.. this is haunting and so. the writing is so simple but punching. im so impressed with this. i feel the grief and anguish the mc does. this is so well written
Finished the demo, can't wait for more
Please add an option to increase the font size. This is barely manageable for me and I have okayish eyesight.
good point! will try to add a font size option next update
hope this gets updated!! really fantastic gritty writing. super interested in the characters and the setup so far
Lmaoooo wow that’s a lot of pain. Ow. That’s. Yeah that’s got a kick to it. ☠️
Found your work through the queer vamp jam and glad I did, loving this wip especially!
Excited for more ✨
lovingggg this!! looking forward for more
Love this so far
Oh it's so goooood, can't wait for more!!
Love it so far ohhhhh <3333
thanks for letting me know! just had a look - might have to do with it being the first longer passage but couldn't find anything else that might be off. does anything seem to be up with the scrollbar?
I will attach another screenshot. Sorry I don't mean to be a bother lol I was just really excited to read the story. I enjoyed the little I read lol it just doesn't allow me to move from that spot. I expected another faded bit of text to click on. I tried reloading and even restarting. Maybe I'm missing something or i will try reading it using a different browser.
you're not being a bother at all! there def should be another faded bit of text - i'll check some different browsers & see if I can find anything! thanks again
I also have the same issue, maybe it's because I'm using a phone tho. It might be fine on larger devices
Edit: it's fine on computers, played it till the end
thanks for telling me! will check to see if there's some slapdash fix i can integrate haha
The best story I have ever read, cant wait for more 🤍
Oh i didnt expect this much pain haha. I played all of your games but even then each passage I read hits hard everytime. It is honestly amazing
Woah, this is neat! love the writing skills!!
ahh thank you so much!
No problem!!!
So excited to see where you will take this!!
thanks!! working on that next part!
Very emotional thus far. Can't wait to se where you take this going forward.
Aww thank you!!!