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hope this gets updated!! really fantastic gritty writing. super interested in the characters and the setup so far

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Lmaoooo wow that’s a lot of pain. Ow. That’s. Yeah that’s got a kick to it. ☠️

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Found your work through the queer vamp jam and glad I did, loving this wip especially!

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Excited for more ✨

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lovingggg this!! looking forward for more

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Love this so far

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Oh it's so goooood, can't wait for more!!

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Love it so far ohhhhh <3333

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would love to read this but am currently stuck on this page with no way forward. There isn't anything to click on tht moves the story forward unfortunately.

thanks for letting me know! just had a look - might have to do with it being the first longer passage but couldn't find anything else that might be off. does anything seem to be up with the scrollbar?

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I will attach another screenshot. Sorry I don't mean to be a bother lol I was just really excited to read the story. I enjoyed the little I read lol it just doesn't allow me to move from that spot. I expected another faded bit of text to click on. I tried reloading and even restarting. Maybe I'm missing something or i will try reading it using a different browser. 

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you're not being a bother at all! there def should be another faded bit of text - i'll check some different browsers & see if I can find anything! thanks again

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I also have the same issue, maybe it's because I'm using a phone tho. It might be fine on larger devices

Edit: it's fine on computers, played it till the end

thanks for telling me! will check to see if there's some slapdash fix i can integrate haha

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The best story I have ever read,  cant wait for more 🤍

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Oh i didnt expect this much pain haha. I played all of your games but even then each passage I read hits hard everytime. It is honestly amazing

Woah, this is neat! love the writing skills!!

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ahh thank you so much!

No problem!!!

So excited to see where you will take this!!

thanks!! working on that next part!

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Very emotional thus far. Can't wait to se where you take this going forward.

Aww thank you!!!