this is amazing, the dialogue between the two is gut-wrenching and I can't get enough of it, the only thing I'm hoping is there's a good ending where these 2 love each other
i've been playin this game over n over, searchin through each possible dialogue option, n i'm pretty much in love w/this game n the overall concept!! i would normally be upset with the small range of choices for the mc, but it kind of gets away w/it for me. keep up the work man! can't wait to see the full :3.
tysm!! also just hypothetically how does one freak out abt one of their fav if authors leaving a comment without compromising their cool composed exterior
Oooh, interesting... It's short (it's a demo, duh) but the atmosphere and writing is just lovely.
For the text flickering... Is it possible for you to add the option to turn it off? As much as possible I turn text effects off in these games. It's hard to read sometimes with these effects...
thanks sm for the feedback and for letting me know abt the coding error!! unfortunately editing the text effects is a little beyond my coding capabilities atm but i’ll have a look! in the meanwhile, feel free to check out my less experimental main wip - oath
it could be more visually interesting. it was a bit difficult for me to read the text as well. hopefully you get those worked out because the writing was good :)
Very well written with a comfortable variety of choices. The storys concept is an interesting idea and I honestly look forward to further development. The simplicity of the games aesthetic is also refreshing. :)
pretty good! i like the ambience and the way subtleties are described. however i would have liked more options for how the mc reacts; the storyline seems too rigid. perhaps there is an in-universe reason for this? anyways, I'll wait the story's progression.
thanks sm for the feedback! there are definitely a few yet-to-be-revealed reasons behind the way the mc is acting (and tbh a few doylist reasons re: laziness and smaller side project haha) but i would absolutely love to hear any suggestions for other actions or choices you think the mc should have a choice to take!
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Is there a sequel to this game? I really like the style of writing inside. But it was so brief that I was still in the mood and it suddenly ended
thank you! depending on where you ended there are either other routes that will be a bit longer, or future updates for the route coming soon
Super looking forward to the sequel to this game. （づ￣3￣）づ╭❤～
wow. this story is amazing. really hope this continues to get updated.
this update is amazing, their interactions hit so hard, it will be great to see what happened on both sides.
I got chills. Stunning writing.
This was amazing! Loved it!
OMG???? OMG???
Wow, just wow. Amazing <3
this is amazing, the dialogue between the two is gut-wrenching and I can't get enough of it, the only thing I'm hoping is there's a good ending where these 2 love each other
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This seems interesting, absolutely love your writing.
I would like all of it please, I'll pay for premium shipping
This is amazing I can't wait for the next part of the story :)
I love how the route of you not believing them goes I would really love to see more.
really looking forward to what this turns into i liked it alot:)
i've been playin this game over n over, searchin through each possible dialogue option, n i'm pretty much in love w/this game n the overall concept!! i would normally be upset with the small range of choices for the mc, but it kind of gets away w/it for me. keep up the work man! can't wait to see the full :3.
IM IN LOVE
I'm on mobile and the scroll is not working 😞
it’s me wanting to believe the spouse is just lucky enough to be back and not actually off in some way
this is so good!! I could feel the tension in my bones, very good writing!
really loved this!! the atmosphere was great and the writing is lovely🥰
tysm!! also just hypothetically how does one freak out abt one of their fav if authors leaving a comment without compromising their cool composed exterior
This is so fun so Wilderness/The Devil's Hour coded, really tickles my neurons
Oooh, interesting... It's short (it's a demo, duh) but the atmosphere and writing is just lovely.
For the text flickering... Is it possible for you to add the option to turn it off? As much as possible I turn text effects off in these games. It's hard to read sometimes with these effects...
Oh, and I found a coding error.
thanks sm for the feedback and for letting me know abt the coding error!! unfortunately editing the text effects is a little beyond my coding capabilities atm but i’ll have a look! in the meanwhile, feel free to check out my less experimental main wip - oath
it could be more visually interesting. it was a bit difficult for me to read the text as well. hopefully you get those worked out because the writing was good :)
thanks for the feedback! i’ll have a look at text visibility. any suggestions on potential visual elements/effects are also super welcome!
Very well written with a comfortable variety of choices. The storys concept is an interesting idea and I honestly look forward to further development. The simplicity of the games aesthetic is also refreshing. :)
ahh thank you so much!!
pretty good! i like the ambience and the way subtleties are described. however i would have liked more options for how the mc reacts; the storyline seems too rigid. perhaps there is an in-universe reason for this? anyways, I'll wait the story's progression.
thanks sm for the feedback! there are definitely a few yet-to-be-revealed reasons behind the way the mc is acting (and tbh a few doylist reasons re: laziness and smaller side project haha) but i would absolutely love to hear any suggestions for other actions or choices you think the mc should have a choice to take!